
Striped to the bone
love so strong
baffles the mind
heart is clinging
groin is weeping
sending senseless messages day or night
No response like a slap in the face
Master your slave is in disgrace?
Pride and ego have erased
Last attempt must let you go
Cutting the cord that held me taunt
Loved you so but you loved naught
Took your knife and sliced me deep
Cleaned off every bit of meat
This sends a powerful message. I hope this is creative and not something you had to experience my friend. I like your art as well. Have a blessed day my friend. Love 💕 you Joni
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Thank you Joni so very much for your comments and concerns. Yes this is creative but also experienced at the moment. Love you too ❤️❤️
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I am sorry my friend. I will say a prayer for your tender young heart right now. Love 💕 Joni
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Thank you darling ❤️
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Cooooool….
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
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Thank you friend for the re-blog ❤️
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You are welcome dear friend. Your story and poetry make me want to write.
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This would be amazing verbal dear Poet. The words, they did deep and they are meaningful. I love how you use the words.
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I don’t know what to say (this is a first because I do like to talk😊). Your support means more than a lot ❤️
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It is done. I hope you like. I love your work and you gave me motivation to write dear poet.
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I am writing a poem because of this one for you. I will post when done.
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🙏💋
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Wow. I felt every pen stroke of that one… Intense! 😮
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Yes I wrote that one with a knife in my heart.
❤️
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